Some people think that the main benefit of greater international cooperation is the protection of the environment. However, others believe that the main benefit is the world of business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is indisputable that cooperation between nations has seen economic prosperity in recent decades whereas to others, it benefits environmental conservation. I would concur with the former view on the grounds that its economical merits are more evident.
For one, the united effort from various organizations along with governments could alleviate environmental issues in the global context within a firm. As cooperation brings about opportunities to exchange viable solutions and perspectives from diverse visions of specialists and experts, more viable solutions could be suggested and combined into practices. For instance, through conferences with foreign environmentalists, Viet Nam has successfully prevented floods in the coastal areas thanks to their support in reconstructing and upgrading the hydraulic systems to deal with the catastrophe. As a result, ecological crises could be more effectively surmounted in comparison with individual endeavors to address the problems.
For another, in regards to the business domain, the extra increment in the social economy could be enriched by international trades prompted by modern industrial civilization in tandem with overseas business development facilitated by governments. Enterprises are allowed to penetrate new markets through open policies and state’s approval in terms of their activities. Not only the sales market could be expanded but also the job market is. Consequently, the competition for rewarding vacancies could be less fierce given the offshore investment in manufacturing for lower labor cost resulting in more jobs and career options available for workers. Both of which will bolster the overall national economic growth.
To conclude, although both views have some certain validity, I would concede that international cooperation gives rise to the economic sector rather than the environment protection solely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, so, whereas, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94525547445 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2262216364 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675182481752 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2149450918 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994057091521 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362595903338 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572904213624 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833521319865 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744215898532 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.53 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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