Many people use internet nowadays
Currently, the internet plays big role in our life and give chance to communicate with people over the world However, it has drawbacks such as distfracting from studing or working also there is unreliable information.
To begin with adventages, people can find information which they need without difficulties. We have a quick access to the internet almost in everywhere and there are a lot of web sites which have unlimited amounts of information. For example most of the popular web sites such as Wikipedia, Student.com, and others, include useful and proper data about history and education.In addition, via the internet we can communicate with people from other counties. If they are far from their home of country they can send messages of connect to each by video calls which help them to feel reality in communication. For instance, we have a lot of apps on social media, such as "Whatsapp" "Viber" "Telegram" and others which have these features
On the other hand, it has disadvantages like distracting. While we are busy with something important, it can distract us with notifications, we may look at them and forget about our deals.While we are working or studying, friends can send funny videos from social media and it can disturb us. As well as, there are much unreliable information which is difficult to believe. It has too much information that are not checked by special who control the internet. In these days, anypeople create web-site and post any information which they want that is way resources are likely to be fake
Conclusion, the internet has certain problems such as unchecked information and may distract us, but it provides instant access to huge quantity of data and has privileges in communication
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... also there is unreliable information. To begin with adventages, people can fin...
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...ple can find information which they need without difficulties. We have a quick ac...
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...hey need without difficulties. We have a quick access to the internet almost in everywhere an...
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...proper data about history and education.In addition, via the internet we can commu...
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...nicate with people from other counties. If they are far from their home of country...
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...is way resources are likely to be fake Conclusion, the internet has certain pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21878432727 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7734329049 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108654208436 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512492692541 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503439926716 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711705453295 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330299214028 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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