The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These two pie charts illustrate six kinds of imports going from Vietnam to the US and inversely going from the US to Vietnam. The volume of merchandise is given as millions of US dollars.Upon initial inspection, it becomes evident that coffee from Vietnam and aircraft parts from the US are two popular exports between these two countries while rice, seafood, fertilizer and machinery are relatively much lower in value.Looking at this data in more detail, it is evident that coffee makes up nearly a half of the total value of exports for Vietnam at 23 million dollars. Similarly, aircraft parts make up about the same ratio of US exports to Vietnam, however, the value is over three times that of coffee at 72million dollars. The second largest valued export from the US for a specific category is machinery at 30 million dollars which is worth twice the amount of the second highest valued Vietnamese export which is produced. Three types of products make up just under a quarter of the total value of exports for both countries, namely, seafood, rice and garments for Vietnam worth a total of 11 million, and fertilizer, cotton, and cars for the US priced at 34.5 million dollars. A major different in the trade between these nations is value of other goods which is only 2 million dollars to Vietnam but a whopping 35 million dollars for the US.In summary, there are a number of different products traded between the two countries and clearly Vietnam spends much more on US exports than American spends on Vietnamese imports
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, similarly, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83969465649 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52866556213 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492366412214 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.494343747 43.030603864 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.333333333 112.824112599 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.6666666667 22.9334400587 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18840687594 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113705150851 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337961073602 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18840687594 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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