While some people think that governments need to ban dangerous sports, others suppose that people can have the freedom to do any sport or activity. From my point of view, I agree with the former idea
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people agree that governments should have the freedom to do any sports or activity. Firstly, every people in over the world are also equal about hobbies and necessary a lot of people love familiar sports such as football swimming other people enjoy dangerous sports. They discover themself and reduce stress. Secondly, some people think that humans need not limit themselves they should search for Dangerous sports to understand that the life around people is so wonderful and amazing
On the one hand, I agree that the government should ban dangerous sports. Flirty, ban dangerous sports can protect people. If dangerous sports become popular, the number of people who die will increase. For example, racing motorbikes that were not banned will be dangerous for people who enjoy the racing and people are walking on the Street. Secondary band a sport will keep social order. life will become peaceful.
In conclusion, some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports while other people believe that people should have the freedom to do any sport or activity. In my opinion, I agree with the former Statement.
- Some people believe that government should ban dangerous sports such as skydiving and rock climbing Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Life
...ry band a sport will keep social order. life will become peaceful. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03043478261 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33215786397 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491304347826 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5599981368 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565339078727 0.244688304435 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215122344589 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204726064034 0.0667982634062 306% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.43314642485 0.151304729494 286% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138663084072 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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