Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is believed by some that money is being squandered on the arts by the administration, instead of spending it on more vital things such as education and sport. I partially agree with this view and believe it is acceptable.
On the one hand, arts play an essential role on development of imagination and cultural knowledge of individuals. In other words, people may get their creativity improved by drawing pictures, moreover, learning and composing poems can also be effective on enhancing one's mindset. For example, it is obvious that a person draws pictures on a regular basis has a tendency to score higher in IQ tests. If the government does not allocate money for the arts, the number of art museums are likely to decrease which may cause loss of culture.
On the other hand, there are more crucial fields that government should spend money on. For instance, it can be used for improvement of education which may reduce the rate of illiteracy by building an array of schools universities and learning centres. On top of this, for the same amount of money, more and more sport facilities might be created. As a result, numerous illnesses such as obesity and heart diseases can be overcome. Hence, money could also be invested in other facilities.
To conclude, although education and sport have untold advantages, it would be unfair to invest money which is giving to the arts in other facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...oems can also be effective on enhancing ones mindset. For example, it is obvious tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91213389121 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76593406911 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598326359833 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8618651592 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236824409206 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092627090289 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612747155823 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15181791251 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054633553259 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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