Thanks to tremendous contribution of information technology branch to expanding diverse forms of learning in the temporary life, students do not only experience a traditional education but they also study under web-based learning.By the time, there is an ongoing discussion whether pupils are likely to studying online due to a huge amount of merits much than physical learning or not.Although i agree with the first opinion, i will demonstrate both views in this essay.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people hold the idea that face-to-face studying has a lot of advantages.Firstly, people suppose that direct interaction between teachers and students is really vital because this help teacher understand about their learners deeply.As a result, students will get the dedicated care as well as some useful advices relating to study problems, private others such as how to study effectively.Secondly, learning on campus students keep a good relationship with their friends, they can exchange exercises or talk to each other, then they can have opportunities to know much clearlier about their friends.Therefore, students will not feel lonely as well have sense of isolation anymore.
On the other hand, i am favour of the other opinion that electronic learning is a greater choice as compared with traditional education due to a lot of merits.Firstly, it allows students to learn from any location instead of being restricted by geographical boundaries like face-to-face learning; for example, when enrolling into a online english course being so far from home, it is easy to learn through online webs such as zoom, microsoft teams which are so prevalent today without going for far distance.Aditionally, online lectures can be recorded and shared which allows students to access the learning materials at any time they need.Secondly, web-based lectures can have some effects thanks to online apps, it can make them become more charming and attract students to pay attention to their subjects as well as avoid being sometimes bored by normal lectures like physical learning.As a result, students can have some impression about their lectures by some pictures or video offered on online lectures which helps them remembers for a long time.Thirdly, this form of learning can reduce financial burden because online learning can minimize transportation fees, students’ meals and school facilities.As a result, there will have the balance of equality learning and the same study chances between rich students and poor students who do not have lots of money for studying conditions.This also helps decrease the rate of illiteracy in that country and appear more talent young people supporting develop that nation in near future.
In conclusion, i still have a trong belief that distant learning offers students the flexibility of time and place in education as well as back up boost the development of countries indirecly.This form learning should be applied for students’ studying more, especially in Corona virus pandemic situation recently.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40794979079 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14164998631 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554393305439 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 799.2 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 119.0 20.2975951904 586% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 472.136301824 49.4020404114 956% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 646.25 106.682146367 606% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 119.5 20.7667163134 575% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.5 7.06120827912 659% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189640139694 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121438281508 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414548184954 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121438281508 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414548184954 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 63.8 13.0946893788 487% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.77 50.2224549098 -115% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 50.9 11.3001002004 450% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.57 8.58950901804 158% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 49.6 10.1190380762 490% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40794979079 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14164998631 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554393305439 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 799.2 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 119.0 20.2975951904 586% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 472.136301824 49.4020404114 956% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 646.25 106.682146367 606% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 119.5 20.7667163134 575% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.5 7.06120827912 659% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189640139694 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121438281508 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414548184954 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121438281508 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414548184954 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 63.8 13.0946893788 487% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.77 50.2224549098 -115% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 50.9 11.3001002004 450% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.57 8.58950901804 158% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 49.6 10.1190380762 490% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.