You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course Write a letter to the course director In your letter explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possi

Essay topics:

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,
explain your interest in the course
describe your problems
find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter about the course which i have taken recently in your sports club, i would like to inform you that i unable to complete the course because i am facing a health issue.

I am very keen to learn cricket and play an international cricket in future. Since childhood i am watching this game and would like to be an international player. I have learnt a lot in your sports club and i improve my cricket.

Currently my health is not in shape, i unable to run on the field and also cannot stay longer in the ground. I have contacted to my family doctor and he prescribed medicines to cure and asked to take rest minimum 2 months.

I have a request for refund of my course fees, since i joined i paid a full course fees in the beginning. I choose an annual membership to take this course. I have just completed two months and rest of the month i cannot attend. If possible, please tell me the procedure of refund.

I really appreciate if you can guide me in the above request.

Yours sincerely,
Mohammed Idris.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41538461538 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.519144319 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7274957011 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30806429513 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929207914022 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105870909907 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141121095956 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117787056261 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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