The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they give birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the age of Australian first-time mothers in three different years.
It is apparent that Australian first-time mothers at 19-24 years of age took the highest proportion in 1996 while the first position in 1986 and 2006 belonged to females between the ages of 25-30 and 30-34 respectively. However, the percentage of first-time mothers over 40 years old was lowest in all three given years.
Turning to the details, over 60% of Australian first-time mothers aged 19 and 24 in 1966 which doubled the figures for women at the age of under 19 and 25-30. In the next 40 years, the percentage of women having their first child between ages of 25 and 40 peaked at 50% which was about double and triple the proportion of first-time mothers at the age of under 19, 30-34 and 34-39, ( 20%,18%,and 16% respectively).
In 2006, the figure for women aged 30-34 was highest (at 45%), followed by 29%,39% and 30% of first-time mothers aged 19-24, 25-30, and 34-39 respectively. In contrast, the percentage of women having their first child at over 40 bottomed at under 10% in all three recorded years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the age of under 19, 30-34 and 34-39, 20%,18%,and 16% respectively. In 2006,...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d 19-24, 25-30, and 34-39 respectively. In contrast, the percentage of women havin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83157894737 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65327895192 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468421052632 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.36542579 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13679584818 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853440726107 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274215545802 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10531602072 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144546789663 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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