In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
In this fast-developing world, the young have been granted with higher income and have better public services that lead to better quality of life; however, there is a growing concern that most of them do not feel happy. In this essay, I would shed light on the primary causes before outlining some viable solutions to mitigate the problems.
To begin with, the major cause is widely believed to be the heavy workload that young people have to deal with every day. High intensity of working might result in a decline in physical functional health. Besides work-related stress, peer pressure could also contribute to the depression that millions of young people are suffering from. With the availability of Internet access, youngsters are more likely to see the achievements of their friends, colleagues or even a stranger at the same age and then feel disappointed because of not having the things those people have. Thousands of suicides every year in Japan is clear evidence of the pressure that people, especially the young, have to face on a daily basis.
Having said that, many young people have recently found their own way to release themselves from depression. The most effective solution might be a better work-life balance accompanied with time management. Moreover, the young should spend their days off travelling and chilling out. There is a growing trend that people in their twenties have a gap year, which means they take a year away from their regular work or study. Another recommendation is that youngsters may contemplate limiting their use of social networks and involving more in physical-demanding activities instead. There has been research proving that exercising is beneficial for both physical and mental health.
In conclusion, depression in young people is arising from the hustle and bustle of daily life. Each person should learn to create balance in their life to lessen the negative impacts that they are suffering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18611987382 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72224577475 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2864413663 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167343737551 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551428228707 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393376315011 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102100402513 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025114694381 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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