Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that climate change is a hard problem in the world. Some people said that we need to find a way to deal with it instead of preventing it. Like every opinion, I choose to give a green light to disagree. Firstly, climate is a reason that affects our daily life. The increase of temperature in the world, especially the damage of the ozone layer, is the reason why the weather on Earth is getting hotter and hotter. Another proof is the surge of sea level. This problem is dangerous and affects some natural disasters such as tsunami, flood,... Moreover, it can be an indirect murder to humans. Both of them and the forest belong to ecosystems, which now are being destroyed. However, they have no sense to care about the change of climate, and they also don’t have any idea about it. Although there are many problems about climate change, some solutions may be the way to make people think about changing their daily issues. First of all, we should create more projects and seminars about how danger does climate change affect the world. Some projects can be organised such as Earth Hours, Evergreen, Anti-flood house, iChange plastics. Secondly, the government needs to have programs to save the environment. Many plans are applied in the world, like the strategy “Making money from recycles” of the Australian Government, planting trees in used plastic bottles or building stadiums like the host of World Cup 2022 - Qatar. Finally, we should have some rules and laws to avoid climate change such as increasing the tax on throwing trash the wrong way, arresting those who commit deforestation and awarding exemplary contributions in environmental protection. All in all, preventing climate change is much better than living with it. However, we also need to update the latest news about this biggest issue to have more plans to protect families from changing climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...natural disasters such as tsunami, flood,... Moreover, it can be an indirect murde...
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Line 1, column 1101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts can be organised such as Earth Hours, Evergreen, Anti-flood house, iChange pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93396226415 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5310252422 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8848329444 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259740787345 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781278755695 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105053511267 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259740787345 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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