Nowadays, tourism generates a significant portion of the national income bracket for many countries, whereas there will also be some drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.
The two main advantages of tourism are boost in country’s economy due to increased spending and new job opening for local people. Firstly, many voyagers travel to a specific destination. They have to spend money on accommodation, amusement, food or beverage. Thus, a large amount of money is provided to this place. Secondly, if many people visit any area. They have to need a wide range of services which need to have more waiter or waitress in the restaurants, housekeepers in the hotel and so on. This makes the local people have more chances to get new jobs. As a result, it helps them to improve their quality of life.
Tourism also has a few disadvantages like the destruction of popular tourist destinations by large numbers of tourists and the development of illegal economic activities. The principal one is that having a massive number of tourists causes environmental pollution in this place. For example, when they eat or drink something, they tend to throw their garbage indiscriminately on the road or stream. In addition, if this is the first time they travel to this place, they do not know about the specific price of the commodity. Therefore, the local people usually sell their products immensely expensive.
In conclusion, tourism could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequence should not be overlooked
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18146718147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95507827132 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8384208676 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150232843742 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450736596099 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559494949857 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106395597653 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533147224009 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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