Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave. Do you agree or disagree?
TV has become an integral part of our lives and the major source of news, entertainment, and education. Millions of people watch TV every day. Do movies and television influence the way people behave? Definitely, yes! I’m going to provide a few examples to illustrate my point of view.
Firstly, multiple researches show that there is a direct correlation between violence on TV and in movies and aggressive behavior of children. Seeing cruelty on TV, they start to think that it is normal. Kids can easily imitate the behavior of their favorite superhero and kick others or damage surrounding things. In addition, several studies confirmed that when people see violence, they become less sensitive and empathetic and can easily pass by the person who needs help. The scariest example is the men who shot in Las Vegas just because he saw something similar in movies.
Secondly, we should not forget about advertising, which is always broadcast on television or is natively present in movies. Manufacturers of goods can manipulate your decisions even in the supermarket, pushing you to buy things you don’t need or make a choice based on what you’ve seen in ad rather than good quality of the product.
Thirdly, movies and TV shows can be a great source of inspiration. For instance, a little girl watched the figure skating competition on the TV, began to dream about becoming a figure skater in the future and today she is Olympic gold medallist. Moreover, there are so many places on the planet you might not know about and if you see them on TV, you will certainly want to visit them.
In conclusion, television and films have an impact on us to be rude, kind, aggressive or tender, but we always have a right to choose who we want to be and how we will behave.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o we want to be and how we will behave.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78827361564 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67128385024 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631921824104 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2018969824 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189897136789 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758562567797 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165990094814 0.0737576698707 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985303338748 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814505133434 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.