Museums and art galleries should focus on works that show the history and culture of their own country rather than works of other parts of the world
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In terms of themes of a museum, there are two schools of thought, with the former gravitating around foreign cultural displays and the latter revolving around works from the country they are located. Personally, although museums are a valuable tool to educate a person about the past of his country, I believe that museums should play an important role in widening a person’s horizons about other civilizations around the world.
On the one hand, proponents of the notion that museum should place emphasis on showcasing exhibits of their own country often point out that museums provide a means of transporting visitors into the context of their culture and history. By and large, people learn about their history through reading history textbooks at school and listening to oral stories from the elderly, which are often patchy and not vivid. However, should children or students be able to pay a visit to a local museum, they will be likely tempted to delve deeper into some certain events of their history. In this way, they can strengthen the bond with their nation or feel proud of the history, which ultimately creates the desire to contribute to the prosperity of their country. In Vietnam, the Education Ministry, after conducting research on history education, has come to agree that by taking students to learn history at national museums, the students are reported to be more excited to learn extensively about their history than by previous teaching methods.
Despite the undeniable benefits, I think museums should also act as a device to broaden a person’s perspective about international cultures or traditions. Generally, not many could afford to travel around the world, visiting different local museums and then learning about the history there. As a result, if a museum’ aim is to focus on an all-round education, then it is necessary to install some foreign cultural spaces in a museum to cater to such requirements. As can be seen with London museum where an array of different exhibits representative of a host of civilizations across the world, visitors can be mesmerized into learning about the other cultures and expand their perspective at ease and without paying for an airplane ticket. With such convenience and reasonable costs, people will be encouraged to revisit and keep gaining more insights into alien cultures.
In conclusion, museums are often denoted with educational purposes, which means I think they need to not only teach domestic guests about their cultures but also introduce them to the beauty of alien ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, i think, in conclusion, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1654676259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72027021305 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537170263789 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8801821593 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.692307692 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0769230769 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226566510282 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082162315742 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384717225926 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130659617601 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418608455637 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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