Hello Suresh,
I got your message about your plan to visit Mumbai on 2 weeks trip. Therefore, I am writing this letter to provide you some suggestions which can help you to plan your trip more efficiently.
First of all, when I came to know about your trip, I felt very happy and excited. I cannot wait more to receive you here at the Airport. In this letter I am giving you some advices on your questions that you have asked me in your last letter. Firstly, for your accommodation, I am sending you the list of famous hotels which are popular here for their hospitality. All hotels are located at the center of the city and can be easily accessible. Secondly, as you know Mumbai is very large city and to visit all well-known places you at least require one week time. I suggest you to take Mumbai Darshan tourist service which is very popular here and has unique trip plan which includes all the famous places. Thirdly, I prefer you should bring some warm clothes with you because winter has already begun here and you may need to face freezing temperature.
I hope that these suggestions help you to schedule your trip more easily. Please let me know about your flight and trip timings so that I can also save some time for you and we can spent some quality time together.
Best wishes,
Pratik Patel
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Mumbai is very large city
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