“Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of the children.
Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children's life, or should the mothers be solely responsible?
In today's world, many women build their professional career with additional responsibility of upbringing of children. It is totally unfair to expect total dedication from them to perform these dual roles equally well. Men should also take responsibility of children and need to contribute in the development of children's future. This essay will discuss about valid arguments for this approach with relative examples.
Firstly, in today's competitive world, it is really challenging to manage responsibilities of children, house and work. So, if we force women to take all the responsibilities of home and children then we are indirectly put extra stress on their life. For instance, in western countries, many women manage their work and children in parallel, but after sometime they required to sacrifice anyone of them to perform better in other. Therefore, working women can not take all the responsibilities of children and men must step up and have to share some of them to release pressure.
Secondly, upbringing of children is the responsibility of both parents. Some of the social values and behavior child can inherit from his father. Therefore, it is crucial for child to spend sufficient time with both parents. Apart from that, if both parents share responsibility with mutual understanding then it creates positive environment in home and also helps children.
In conclusion, upbringing of child is a very critical phase of child's life and therefore both parents need to perform this duty with mutual understanding and co-operation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'managing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: managing
...etitive world, it is really challenging to manage responsibilities of children, house and...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... is the responsibility of both parents. Some of the social values and behavior child can in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36885245902 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12385426457 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7464186567 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162106975395 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626719284876 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419501458383 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946522650488 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662432534853 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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