life on venus can be possible in a floating station above its surface
The essay explains the general idea that it is theoretically impossible to maintain life on the surface of venus due to its unviable conditions. The article generates three main reasons to support its claim: the first being the high pressure -almost 90 times greater than on earth- on the surface of the venus. The second reason venus is not habitable for humans is the lack of water and oxygen, and finally, the third argument discussed in the article is that very little sunlight reaches the surface of the venus due to a very heavy filter made of clouds and carbon dioxide in lower latitudes.
The lecturer contradicts the points made by the article on the basis that life is possible not on the surface of the venus, but in a floating station above the surface. the idea of the floating station thoroughly resolves all our aforementioned difficulties. as we know, the pressure decreases as we get higher latitude from the surface. so, in a floating station in high latitudes, humans have no risk of being crushed because of high pressure.
As for water and oxygen, a station can provide facilities to generate water and oxygen from carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid present in Venus' atmosphere. it is much more practical to use chemical reactions rather than transferring water and oxygen from the earth as mentioned in the article.
Finally to resolve the problem of sunlight, the floating station which is above the surface of the Venus not only gets much more direct sunlight, but it can also use the sunlight that is reflected from the clouds to generate power.
In conclusion, we can say with creative scientific solutions life on the Venus can be very much possible and some day, practical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... on earth- on the surface of the venus. The second reason venus is not habitable fo...
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...d carbon dioxide in lower latitudes. The lecturer contradicts the points made by...
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...n a floating station above the surface. the idea of the floating station thoroughly...
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...es all our aforementioned difficulties. as we know, the pressure decreases as we g...
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...e get higher latitude from the surface. so, in a floating station in high latitude...
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...e earth as mentioned in the article. Finally to resolve the problem of sunlight, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, third, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 291.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89003436426 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61466189407 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487972508591 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4959574576 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451816421275 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15948379083 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116895699014 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228024850012 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866224055066 0.0443174109184 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.