You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this.
Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ... ,
Dear Mrs. Lee,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the noise that always makes me feel annoyed every night from your house.
First of all, I would like to explain this problem in detail. Last week, when I was studying, I suddenly noticed that there was a noise nearby. I could not concentrate on studying owing almost completely to this annoying noise. I opened the door, and I saw in your house's window, there were lots of people singing together. I made a snap decision to come to your house and scold them for making so much noise. However, I soon kept my temper and forgave them this time. On the next days, not only did they carry on singing at night, but they also laughed loudly. Thus, I am forced to send you this letter.
Furthermore, I hope that this matter can be resolved by telling the people off and preventing them from entering your house. If this problem does not improve, I will contact the police to solve it as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Linh.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e were lots of people singing together. I made a snap decision to come to your ho...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58288770053 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36073090717 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679144385027 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1255186101 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9230769231 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258393889025 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815205368049 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575568680794 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129552635374 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502571012361 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e were lots of people singing together. I made a snap decision to come to your ho...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58288770053 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36073090717 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679144385027 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1255186101 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9230769231 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258393889025 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815205368049 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575568680794 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129552635374 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502571012361 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.