The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the striking similarities in the figures for hours each teacher spent teaching in alternative schools in 4 countries, namely Japan, Spain, Iceland and the U.S.A in the year of 2001.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that the number of hours that each teacher spent educating in the U.S.A was the highest, while quantity of hours devoted by each teacher in upper secondary school was the most popular. In contrast, the lowest figure belonged to that in Japan.
When it comes to the number of hours of educating spent by each teacher in upper secondary school, it is evident that the U.S.A took the lead. accounting for nearly 1200, followed by Spain and Iceland, numbering 900. Making up approximately 700, Japan ranked third.
The figures for hours spent by each teacher on education in lower secondary primary school was considerably lower than that of upper secondary school. To specify, there were about 1000 hours spent in lower secondary school in the U.S.A, whereas fewer hours devoted in primary school Spain and U.S.A, claiming 610 hours. It is also noticeable that Spain and Japan followed the former, with 750 and 610 hours respectively, while contributing 600, Japan followed behind the latter. Only a relative small 600 and 590 hours was seen in lower secondary and primary school separately in Iceland.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...amely Japan, Spain, Iceland and the U.S.A in the year of 2001. Overall, it is ...
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...amely Japan, Spain, Iceland and the U.S.A in the year of 2001. Overall, it is ...
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...each teacher spent educating in the U.S.A was the highest, while quantity of hour...
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...dary school, it is evident that the U.S.A took the lead. accounting for nearly 12...
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Suggestion: Accounting
...s evident that the U.S.A took the lead. accounting for nearly 1200, followed by Spain and ...
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Suggestion: A
...nt in lower secondary school in the U.S.A, whereas fewer hours devoted in primary...
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...devoted in primary school Spain and U.S.A, claiming 610 hours. It is also noticea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01315789474 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48208028275 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3387731589 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230028088699 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100571403885 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801593908292 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171932457608 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388438777792 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...amely Japan, Spain, Iceland and the U.S.A in the year of 2001. Overall, it is ...
^
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...amely Japan, Spain, Iceland and the U.S.A in the year of 2001. Overall, it is ...
^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...each teacher spent educating in the U.S.A was the highest, while quantity of hour...
^
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...dary school, it is evident that the U.S.A took the lead. accounting for nearly 12...
^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Accounting
...s evident that the U.S.A took the lead. accounting for nearly 1200, followed by Spain and ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...nt in lower secondary school in the U.S.A, whereas fewer hours devoted in primary...
^
Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...devoted in primary school Spain and U.S.A, claiming 610 hours. It is also noticea...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01315789474 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48208028275 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3387731589 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230028088699 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100571403885 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801593908292 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171932457608 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388438777792 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.