You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student studying in Final year of engineering in Computer department and a resident of your hostel (Flat 204). Currently, we are two students staying in the room. I have been moved to this room from January 2022, but I am facing lot of problems with this allotment and it is in a way impacting my studies.
Being a final year student, I am supposed to work on projects, assignments and my internship job as well. And, since my room partner is into Art department, he is involved in Singing and dancing activities. So, during his free time he practices playing musical instruments, singing and dancing on loud music. Due to all these reasons, it has been extremely hard for me to concentrate on my studies.
I request you to please help me with the change in my accommodation. I would be happy if you consider my request and look for someone who is co-operative and studying in my department. Since, they might have work schedule similar to mine and we can manage our activities together.
Looking forward for a positive response from your end.
Yours Sincerely,
Raj Madan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-03-28 | rakholiyadivyesh50@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2023-01-16 | m_sepahi@ymail.com | 81 | view |
| 2022-11-04 | Arshdeep0900 | 84 | view |
| 2022-06-03 | Firdouspathan | 50 | view |
| 2022-06-03 | Firdouspathan | view |
- Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots What is your opinion 53
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In the letter describe the situation
- The only reason to work hard is to earn money To what extent do you agree or disagree 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r end. Yours Sincerely, Raj Madan.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73846153846 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81442700075 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1070443998 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119077337304 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421448888053 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471948302006 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653023194782 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515596272176 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.