This topic raises the controversial issue of whether science and research have simplified and gave a better understanding of the life or in contrary increased the complexity of it.Indisputably, science has been a game changer for a lot of domains in the world like technology, research, defence and many other prominent things which are moving countries towards the route of development.Every discovery that was made from the age of Newton to that of NASA in the current times, led to an invention which made our future better.I definitely agree with the opinion, experimentation and research makes our understanding of the world better and would argue that without the curiosity and the urge to learn things around us, the world cannot be understood.
First of all, I think the people and researchers tried to understand the world by asking the right questions and their own curiosity and excitement about life made them pave a path through which they tried to answer those thoughts by experimenting, failing and getting familiar with the mechanism of a process.To illustrate let us look at the example of Newton observing the sense of gravity that earth possessed by watching an apple fall from a tree.It was this fall that made him to work on the earth, its gravitational field which helped a lot of vehicles, rockets, technology to be designed for future mankind.
On contrary people might also raise an issue about this opinion and say science and research also made our way more complex and made humans problematic.Every invention, every thought that mankind put forward till date, has always been a double edged sword.In the end it would all depend on the proper usage of the knowledge that we are absorbing. Every solution that we script for a problem is through research, experimentation, however both common sense and personal experience have told us that we can choose if the solution we are proposing is making our lives easy or way more complex.
In conclusion, although science has always helped and failed us equally, I genuinely feel a good amount of learning, research and evaluation of a certain process in the world is vital to understand the nuances of the small things that happen on earth
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- Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized Write a response in which you d 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01081081081 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90647497598 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.0359550562 321% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.492189633 60.3974514979 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.8 118.986275619 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.0 23.4991977007 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.4 5.21951772744 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227624115396 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124965459708 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541073552773 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138798789229 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481276547834 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.2 14.1392134831 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 48.8420337079 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.1743820225 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 11.8971910112 513% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.2143820225 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Indisputably
...contrary increased the complexity of it.Indisputably, science has been a game changer for a ...
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Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...ntries towards the route of development.Every discovery that was made from the age of...
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... invention which made our future better.I definitely agree with the opinion, expe...
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...amiliar with the mechanism of a process.To illustrate let us look at the example o...
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...d by watching an apple fall from a tree.It was this fall that made him to work on ...
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...ore complex and made humans problematic.Every invention, every thought that mankind p...
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...e, has always been a double edged sword.In the end it would all depend on the prop...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the small things that happen on earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01081081081 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90647497598 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.0359550562 321% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.492189633 60.3974514979 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.8 118.986275619 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.0 23.4991977007 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.4 5.21951772744 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227624115396 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124965459708 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541073552773 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138798789229 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481276547834 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.2 14.1392134831 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 48.8420337079 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.1743820225 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 11.8971910112 513% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.2143820225 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.