The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo.
The diagram details the different steps needed to build an igloo from snow blocks.
A closer look at the process highlights 13 stages, beginning with cutting hard-packed snow and ending with the creation of ventilation holes in the roof or wall.
The building of igloo starts with hard-packed snow are cut by snow saw. After the original large blocks are formed, it is smoothed its eages and grouped together into half-sphere .
Subsiquently, a hole under the wall is digged for entrance. Next, which blocks is quite too large will be placed finally and on the top of the igloo. Following this, snow is fille onto the empty parts of the igloo to strengthen the structure. The the crevices is smoothed by hand inside the igloo before the hole at the entrance is covered by snow blocks like a roof. In the end, ventilation hole will be needed in the wall or roof.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es and grouped together into half-sphere . Subsiquently, a hole under the wall is...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
... the igloo to strengthen the structure. The the crevices is smoothed by hand inside the...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
... the igloo to strengthen the structure. The the crevices is smoothed by hand inside the...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48689160263 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5690879125 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190876748352 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790062395568 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999046440646 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137960663689 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115508898431 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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