The line graph below shows the result of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country
The city immigration rate of a single nation is shown on this diagram and it also includes four main explanations to answer the moving question from 2000 to 2015. Overall, due to job opportunities, people had the highest demand in the urban area during the course of 15 years.
Taking a closer look, searching for a career in the capital city at the beginning of the century is a must for almost 60 thousands people. The trend of this kept moving forward in the next 10 years. Even though the number of people choosing to study in the city experienced a gradual increase, it hit the peak at nearly 90,000 people in 2015 which contrasted with the employment trend.
Looking at the downside of the chart, the reasons for meeting family and friends, and taking an adventure were the two lowest tendencies throughout the time. These mentioned factors shared a similarity trend. The people’s rate for two reasons stood at ten thousand people and rose slowly until the research period.
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- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion 11
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion 11
- The line graph below shows the result of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country 78
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...ad the highest demand in the urban area during the course of 15 years. Taking a closer look, sear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55134132576 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5987938437 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140629027369 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544769104446 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309951738477 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899033850365 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183524490487 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.