The provided bar chart depicts data on how people from 25 to 34 live in a house or an apartment between 2004 and 2014 in England.
Overall, it can be seen that the rate for home owners was the most significant, while the figure for rental owners had the lowest at the beginning of the period. However, the proportion of renters was higher than home owners at the end of the period. There were some oscillations in both the the percentages of home owners and renters throughout the year.
In the first 4 years, people who tend to buy home accounted for nearly 60% to around 55% in 2007. The figure for home owners recorded a descending trend from 2008 to 2010 which were around 55%, over 50% and less than 50%, respectively. The figure for home owners and rental owners both remained constant in 2011 and 2012 at about 43% and around 41%. Then, the proportion of adults who bought home declined steadily to around 35% after 10 year-period.
In terms of people who rented homes, the figure oscillated throughout 6 years before reaching the plateau in 2011 and 2012. After 2012, there was a considerably increase in the proportion of renters which was around 43% and over two times higher than in 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d. There were some oscillations in both the the percentages of home owners and renters ...
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Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d. There were some oscillations in both the the percentages of home owners and renters ...
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Message: You used an adverb ('considerably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...in 2011 and 2012. After 2012, there was a considerably increase in the proportion of renters which was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60465116279 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42733665225 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2746327818 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0626664756579 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02998923196 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439037985151 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551727285052 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569296800589 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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