When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that some job seekers select their careers based on salary level. While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others base their job choice on more important considerations rather than salary alone.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why people should choose a high-paying job. One reason is that a
wage plays an integral part in guaranteeing an acceptable standard of living. Being offered a high salary allows
employees to meet their basic needs, buy a comfortable house and perhaps even go on luxury holidays. Furthermore,
one of the best motivations is a competitive salary. For example, the head of a company may offer a pay rise to a new
employee who is able to achieve a sales target during the year. This rewarding perk will encourage the new sales staff to
try hard and enhance their level of job performance.
On the other hand, job seekers have different reasons apart from salary to choose a job. Firstly, job satisfaction is extremely important when people choose their career. If a person adores the outdoor life, he will not be happy being a stockbroker or a financier, no matter that the salaries for both jobs are extremely high. Secondly, contributing to the community is another reason to consider a job. This could bring about much more civilized society. For instance, Mr.John an Australian man, who has lived in Canada for about 20 years, has constructed 6 schools and other facilities for disabled children instead of working for the Australian Embassy.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that money can be an important factor for many people when choosing prospective
employment, but this is by no means the key consideration for everybody in making a career decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 473, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
...ore civilized society. For instance, Mr.John an Australian man, who has lived in Can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91891891892 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78026378083 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1126310027 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186995142508 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693945011312 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679608819284 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645504914776 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587529366004 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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