Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone
number,...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking
purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that a growing number of people have put their personal details online. While there are undoubtedly dangers in this, I believe that the convenience of putting such data on the internet outweighs the negative aspects.
On the one hand, personal information which is held online may be stolen or misused in some way by cybercriminals. For example, thanks to advances in technology, online banking is now common. People must trust the security measures put in place by banks and by companies
to ensure that their bank account details are guaranteed to be secure from computer hackers. Strict codes of conduct minimize the dangers but, in contrast, criminals can access all kinds of personal information which people naively provide on social networking sites, such as Facebook or Instagram. As a result, users of these sites may find that they are victims of online scams.
On the other hand, the storage of personal information online is convenient in various ways. Firstly, it enables people to pay for goods ordered over the internet, for instance. Time-consuming visits to the shops or the bank have been superseded by simply clicking a computer key. Secondly, sharing personal information on social network sites is one of those socio-economic changes which has revolutionized patterns of behavior. Friends and family members who have access to the internet are able to keep in touch freely and easily. Thus, sharing personal details online for business or pleasure has accelerated the flow of information and is user-friendly, and therefore old ways of doing things have become obsolete.
In conclusion, despite the risks of personal online information falling into the wrong hands, I would argue that the convenience of sharing this information outweighs these risks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s put in place by banks and by companies to ensure that their bank account detail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25174825175 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85162100979 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2409008949 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309963958823 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970298058176 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489845142761 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164139557686 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358156888932 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.