It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer..
.Regarding the establishment of a new restaurant in my neighborhood, I am strongly inclined to support this/ the idea. Being a bachelor that /whom always has to order food from far/distant areas, the construction of a new restaurant in my neighborhood can be indicated as a great facility for /in my life. Although, this issue can be described as a conflicting subject by some neighbors, my tendency to support it, is highly related to my personal characteristics. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, for happily single men preoccupied with numerous tasks and always have lots of things on their plate, as far as I am concerned, it is absurd to assign a significant amount of time to prepare food. In addition, it is not beneficial to spend a huge amount of money and consume lots of expensive materials for preparing /to prepare an appropriate meal even though the healthy factors of homemade foods are recommended by media. As a result, the presence of a restaurant engaged/ comes with several advantages one of which might be erasing any obligation to make food and always being anxious about time scheduling from a bachelor’s mind. It can be interpreted as a perfect opportunity to save some money as well.
Another primary reason of my preference to support the idea of building a new restaurant is providing a place to gather /get together with my intimate friends and have fun with them. Due to the restriction of having a party in the complex I accommodate such as no producing piercing noise or invading other neighbors’ privacy, I always spend high time to find an appropriate place for holding /to hold a special ceremony. Needless to say, the presence of this rendezvous can temporarily play a useful role in my life.
Taking all of the mentioned advantages into account, the construction of a restaurant is a good option for me considering the financial problem, time limitation for preparing food, and beyond all this/these finding a comfortable place to have fun without any bothersome. Although, I could/ can not repudiate some problems associated with the presence of a restaurant such as the initiation of traffic jam, producing some local pollutants and different strangers commuting in the neighbourhood, regrading my conditions as a tenant, the presence of this place is surely to my benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 7.0 443% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 103.0 33.7804878049 305% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3611.0 965.302439024 374% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 663.0 196.424390244 338% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44645550528 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07432619952 3.73543355544 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22501104152 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 106.607317073 302% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485671191554 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1127.7 283.868780488 397% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 17.0 4.33902439024 392% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 8.94146341463 302% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2078244359 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.740740741 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 3.70975609756 485% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22728365893 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668553073648 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614458564463 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14016972387 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489087769993 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 196.0 40.7170731707 481% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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