For the person, childhood is the most important period. It is because values were formed and we learned many things when we were young . That is why parents scold their children a lot. I think it is most important to have an honest habit when we are young. The reason is for these three reasons.
First, honest habits should be formed at an early age. There is a saying “ old habits die hard.” Like this, it is really important to form good habits when people are young. Personality is especially important, so I think being honest should be well formed. For example, my friend said that her parents considered being polite and nice the most important since she was young, so parents scolded her if she was annoyed with an adult. Therefore, she grew up to be a friend who is loved by all adults.
Second, other abilities can be learned slowly after. I think it is good that children receive character education at home and academic studies at school. This is because children can feel intimidated if their parents want too much from their children from an early age. In fact, many children in Korea often run away from home or give up their studies because their parents made them study too much when they were young.
Last, the honest people are full of confidence. People who learned to be honest when they were young can be honest even when they grow up. They have high self-esteem because they are always proud and loved by people. For example, on the other hand, the shepherd boy always lied and everyone did not believe him. Since honesty also determines relationships, people should learn well from an early age.
This is why I think being honest is the most important thing to the children. Of course, it is best to grow up healthy, but in addition to that, if you grow up nicely and honestly, you can think of having a perfect childhood.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e learned many things when we were young . That is why parents scold their childre...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... think of having a perfect childhood.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59638554217 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28884783461 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0680259278 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24308467266 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825140408372 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871325413908 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140459823473 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806526501055 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e learned many things when we were young . That is why parents scold their childre...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... think of having a perfect childhood.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59638554217 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28884783461 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0680259278 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24308467266 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825140408372 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871325413908 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140459823473 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806526501055 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.