Some people think that authorities should use money on railroad, while the others argue that the money should be spent on developing avenue. From my perspective, I agree that the railway ought to be improved, but the other side should be considered. This following essay will dicuss the reasons for this statement.
On one hand, using railway has many advantages. One of that is suitable for transporting large amount of people and commodities. For instance, if someone wants to go somewhere with lots of goods, using railway system will solve that problem. They can travel in long distance without fatigue. Besides, it is a fixed line, so it will be convenient for people who have a job far away from home. They do not have to be in traffic congestion and they can reduce time on commuting. Moreover, they can use that time to prepare other things before working, it will make them have a good mood.
On the other hand, spending expense on railway has some drawbacks. As can be seen from the cost that the road is lower than rail one in building and maintaining. For example, if the road has damaged, the constructors will identify the area. Then, they use chemical material to fix it. This method will reduce the price on maintaining, while in railroad, they have to rebuild with the new one and the cost will be more expensive. Besides, the road can access to wide range of terrain. In addition, road is compatible with the rugged terrain like mountain, trail, etc or the narrow one like alley. In my country, there are many alleys, so building railway system is so impossible. Moreover, if the railway is used for mountain, the constructors have to devastate it in order to build the track line. This way will destroy the nature and make it become less majestic.
To sum up, using money for railway has many benefits. However, in some countries, such as developing countries, it is not the essential thing that the government have to spend on due to the terrains or expenses.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Sagar Gurung
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71469740634 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56288498378 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507204610951 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2014898788 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148912137969 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444700348259 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406615998204 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101681598474 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393450526439 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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