Nowadays, we get a lot of stress in our lives. If we live without relieving these stresses, we will be sick or live in despair. Therefore, we should find a way to escape the stress.I will tell you how to relieve your stress at once. My stress reliever is delicious food. I will explain how food relieves stress in three ways.
First, spicy food relieves stress when you are angry. Sometimes when we do a test, we check the wrong answer, fight with friends or have a lot of homework, these situations make us too angry. If you eat spicy food in this situations, your anger disappears automatically and your irritation disappears at once. Also, while sweating, you can feel you have already won a competition with that annoying target. For example, I was so angry because one of the friend did not cooperate in the group project before, but after eating spicy tteokbokki, my anger disappeared at once.
Second, sweet food relieves the depressed mood. We are often depressed or have lower self-esteem than angry things in our lives. If we are in a depressed mood, we do not want to do anything. In these situations, sweet food is the best medicine. If we eat sweet cake, doughnuts or jelly when we are depressed, it feels like we are on a trip to a sweet world and my life is sweet again. For instance, last year, I get a bad score even though I studied hard. That time, my mom bought me a doughnut and I still can not forget it. I appreciate the doughnut that took my tears.
Last, even seasonal stress can be solved with food. In the summer, If it is too hot, we feel lethargic or we do not want to do anything. In this case, if you eat cold ice cream or fruit salad, you can relieve stress. On the other hand, in winter, warm bungeoppang or rice soup warms up the cold stress.
Like this, food can easily relieve our stress. In Particular, I think the food seems to be better because it has a situation-specific solution.I hope other people also use this way to relieve their stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45753424658 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55738419558 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512328767123 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6628785922 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7916666667 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2083333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18302609614 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586811656833 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587096539441 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121919762746 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05422661546 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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