beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The importance of Internet which was always debatable has now become more
controversial with many people claimimg that it is beneficial while others reject this
Notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the
potential impacts in recent years. In my opiniom the former proposition appears
to be more rational. This essay will furthrt elaborate my views for favouring merits and
Demerits impacts of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
After analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and the formost reason
Behind this is that misuse of technology for criminal purposes. Thousand of people make fake profile to misguide others. For instance, In 2022 as per victim survey of india, a great web application hacked by some hacker only with the use of internet or new technological system by with whatsapp company faced loss of a version.
Another striking benefit in this regard Is that internet eliminate the privacy of individuals. To elaborate more and more people want to become famous on various websites and applications. So it makes easy to find anyone at anywhere just by clicking on their profiles or putting their names on websites.
categorically discussing it cannot be ignored that the main Reason behitnd this is that heavy use of internet will disturb individuals mentally as well as physically. Youngster spend a lot of time on internet for studies, gaming,chatting or so on other purposes but they refused to play at playgrounds,gardens or parks whereas they spend their important or valuable time on internet for day and night. Internet is a platform where most of the persons are well addicted of this and cannot take proper sleep.
Probing ahead one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that every business become online or digital so internet is best choice for them to be connected with peoples of all around the word.
Moving further it is pertinent to mention that it helps to save time by with individuals can do so many thing on internet without access anywhere. For example, on internet there are thousand of application are available those help to them for different puposes’s.Such as shopping, medical advices and dating websites by with masses can interact with other people.
Moreover during panedemic of covid mostly people got jobless. But with the help of internet few of them got online jobs by with they earn sufficient money for their basic needs by work from home.
Apart from the freason mentioned Above it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of this trend.
To recapitulate,according to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a
conclusion that the demerits of internet are dire to ignore.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 26.3917525773 296% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 937.175257732 246% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 452.0 206.0 219% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11061946903 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 3.78020617076 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90542914583 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 127.690721649 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546460176991 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 290.88556701 250% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 1.44329896907 693% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3710390342 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.578947368 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7894736842 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.29896907216 372% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210016423447 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623255899142 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331754277854 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655162499601 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440647312081 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 41.2886597938 312% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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