beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The importance of Internet which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claimimg that it is beneficial while others reject this Notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impacts in recent years. In my opiniom the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will furthrt elaborate my views for favouring merits and demerits impacts of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
After analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and the formost reason behind this is that misuse of technology for criminal purposes.thousand of people make fake profile to misguide others. For instance, In 2022 as per victim survey of india, a great web application hacked by some hacker only with the use of internet or new technological system by with whatsapp company faced loss of a version. Another striking benefit in this regard Is that internet eliminate the privacy of individuals. To elaborate more and more people want to become famous on various websites and applications. So it makes easy to find anyone at anywhere just by clicking on their profiles or putting their names on websites. categorically discussing it cannot be ignored that the main Reason behitnd this is that heavy use of internet will disturb individuals mentally as well as physically. Youngster spend a lot of time on internet for studies, gaming,chatting or so on other purposes but they refused to play at playgrounds,gardens or parks whereas they spend their important or valuable time on internet for day and night. Internet is a platform where most of the persons are well addicted of this and cannot take proper sleep.
Probing ahead one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that every business become online or digital so internet is best choice for them to be connected with peoples of all around the word. Moving further it is pertinent to mention that it helps to save time by with individuals can do so many thing on internet without access anywhere. For example, on internet there are thousand of application are available those help to them for different puposes’s.Such as shopping, medical advices and dating websites by with masses can interact with other people.Moreover during panedemic of covid mostly people got jobless. But with the help of internet few of them got online jobs by with they earn sufficient money for their basic needs by work from home. Apart from the freason mentioned Above it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of this trend.
To recapitulate,according to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the demerits of internet are dire to ignore but merits are indeed too great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 5.05154639175 356% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 26.3917525773 296% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 937.175257732 247% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 456.0 206.0 221% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 3.78020617076 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97398176848 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 127.690721649 195% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 290.88556701 253% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2166046253 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8235294118 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208540841092 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065918445352 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351560764116 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113265774095 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510005582734 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 8.37731958763 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 41.2886597938 303% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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