In many countries families are smaller than before.
Is it a positive or negative development for family and society?
Currently, a majority of countries families are acquiring smaller than before. It would be beneficial for parents to have 1 or 2 children. Thre are some advantages, most parents can provide all things such as with money to children. Additionally, if they have many sons parent who need helping of materials, they can not feed them by this way, the may not purchase which they want.
To begin with, if every parent has 1 or 2 children in family it would be financially convenient for them, because they spend money on their school's tax or study education and supply with clothes and food. Most parents can not feed if they have a lot of children, that is why they do not willing to have a lot l. For example, my brother has one son and he spends time on his son approximately 2 hours and then works on his workplace calmly.
On the other hand, these days a number of population grows up as well as, an increase the number of population could cause to the destruction of the earth. In spite of that, receiving a small families are comfortable to feed and provide them and parents enhance their children's outlook and they have over time in this than huge families.
In conclusion, many countries are having little families get a positive effects for government and parents. I would believe, these days a small families are becoming more and more and it is not terrible of having less children. Choosing this lifestyle is positive development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65490196078 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63561505982 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7592583225 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206791389365 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950363923668 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106469086131 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141973595946 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903957487803 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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