The cost of international travel is decreasing and tourism is increasing in many countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the rising trend of tourism for countries?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A common maxim has in marketing policy that if the demand of wares is high then the price of the product can be a less. Nowadays, same thing is true for travelers; the cost of transportation, accommodation and meals are in wane because of excessive tourism. However, some drawbacks have behind this trend but it brings benefits elsewhere.
The tourism is an emerging economic sector of every country in the world because each country has some vibrant places to attract, historical places to see and cultures to enjoy. Some countries in the world tourism are the 2nd largest revenue earning platfo...
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some drawbacks have behind this trend
some drawbacks have been behind this trend
Sentence: Governments of those countries built up a tourism-friendly infrastructure and offer a low cost journey to entice tourists over the world and those countries are gained a lot of surplus money which is used countries' others development.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and development
Sentence: Moreover, authority has to deploy more gunmen and security officers to ensure tourist-safety zones which left ruin the overall law and order situation in country.
Description: A verb, past tense is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to left and ruin
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