Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
From the inception of human civilization to the present time, mankind has developed itself through some profound scientific breakthroughs. Though these discoveries helped us to understand the world and sometimes help to extrapolate many future events, in fact, these discoveries are presenting us that the world, we know, is something beyond our usual knowledge and it is complex in nature.
There is no doubt that intense research by scientists around the world has done no less to understand the world. For example, now we all know the cause of rain and how precipitation occurs, and this process seems so simple that even a level 3 student can describe the event. Similarly, it is now very clear that the moon is responsible for high tide and ebb tide in the coastal regions and based on the scientific data general people can determine the exact time of tides. Ostensibly, the capability of knowing the reasons behind some specific natural phenomena and the ability to prognosticate about one or two future events may provoke us to say that we are now understanding the world much better than before. However, till now, what we have known is very infinitesimal and insufficient to say that we have a proper understanding of this universe.
For example, while the discovery of gravity and subsequent inventions related to space provided humankind with the achievement of travelling to the moon, at the same time it introduced the people to the intricate nature of the world. For instance, the obstacles astronauts faced penetrating the world atmosphere only indicate the complexity of this earth. To the unaided eye, the sky seems very clear and empty space, but in fact, the whole atmosphere is made of the different lairs of gas and every lair acts differently in terms of density, temperature, pressure etc. This knowledge about the seemingly empty space surrounding the earth is obviously a scientific discovery and it helped us to understand the earth at the same time it strongly proved that the earth is very complex, the thing we often misunderstand.
An even more compelling example can be the way by which trees are surviving; photosynthesis. The trees around us are self-depended and they make and process their food by themselves. The method of taking necessary nutrients for thriving trees using the heat of the sun is called photosynthesis. They actually use the sunlight to make their food in the cell of their leaves. However, at night they use a different method and they also grasp minerals from the soil through their roots. These processes are simple enough to describe rather than replicate by scientists in the laboratory because of their intricacy. Similarly, many discoveries about bacteria, viruses, and disease are only depicting us that we are just uncovering a complex book not knowing where it ends.
To sum up, many discoveries are there which enable us to understand the world but those are not enough and those actually portray to us that the seemingly simple world is something very complex.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...ess seems so simple that even a level 3 student can describe the event. Similarly, it i...
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Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...re events may provoke us to say that we are now understanding the world much better than before. Howe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0438247012 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87027392512 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501992031873 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2066330211 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.263157895 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4210526316 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31202931357 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876277524515 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836199345255 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188572576484 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658079781546 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...ess seems so simple that even a level 3 student can describe the event. Similarly, it i...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...re events may provoke us to say that we are now understanding the world much better than before. Howe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2532.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0438247012 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87027392512 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501992031873 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2066330211 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.263157895 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4210526316 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31202931357 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876277524515 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836199345255 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188572576484 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658079781546 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.