The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Cooperation is the bed rock of any successful association, it is the coming together of people with varying interest to achieve a greater good for all. The issue topic that the best way for a society to prepare its youth for leadership in government is through cooperation and not competition. Some may argue otherwise, citing facts of how competition can make people to think deeeper sometimes and how it can also be a motivation. However, I strongly agree with the position of the issue topic because of the reasons below.
Firstly, Coperation from its definition is similar to the idea of a nation, which is coming together of people with diverse interest. Cooperation therefore allow diverse ability to be brought together so that a greater good can be achieved. A very good example is the united states of america, it is not regarded as the greatest nation in the world because of its land mass or any other reason rather than the fact that it is made up pof states with different economic needs, different race and interest coming together to build a one powerful and united country, if states in the united states should start competing among themselves today, it will only take a few decades for all of them to loss their glory because al their glory is derived from the fact that their are coperating as one. At the same time, most successful nations in the world achieve all their have through cooperation which implies that any nation that want to progress should emulate what they did . Which is to shun competition and embrace coperation among youths because the youths are the life of every successful society.
Secondly, Acoperatin also helps to foster unity and sense of patriotism and productivity among people. One power of coperation is in how it allows people to have the sense that their are fighting for one thing. be it a task or protecting their interest. A good example is ine the case of a business or any other organization, wherre we normally have diifferent department performing different roles. Finance team cannot achieve much on their own, same way that production team cant sell what they produce too. But through the power of coperaton, all this group come together and build some thing great for the business. Same is applicable in government too. If youths are nurtured in this samer way, they can see strenght in their individual abilities when it is brought together too.
In conclusion, one may argue that competition brings out the best and allow those not improving to die off. it is a plausible claim, but even when the best in people come up through competition, without this people coming together, theiy will not be able to achieve anything meaningful. which is of no use for what a nation represent.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 763, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...eir glory is derived from the fact that their are coperating as one. At the same time...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 970, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to progress should emulate what they did . Which is to shun competition and embrac...
^^
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...it allows people to have the sense that their are fighting for one thing. be it a tas...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Be
... that their are fighting for one thing. be it a task or protecting their interest....
^^
Line 4, column 478, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...heir own, same way that production team cant sell what they produce too. But through...
^^^^
Line 4, column 586, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
... all this group come together and build some thing great for the business. Same is applic...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d allow those not improving to die off. it is a plausible claim, but even when the...
^^
Line 6, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...be able to achieve anything meaningful. which is of no use for what a nation represen...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83262711864 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63386597543 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.310116802 60.3974514979 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.05 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210092255027 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688878479856 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708574045546 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141430877648 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534275798153 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 763, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...eir glory is derived from the fact that their are coperating as one. At the same time...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 970, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to progress should emulate what they did . Which is to shun competition and embrac...
^^
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...it allows people to have the sense that their are fighting for one thing. be it a tas...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Be
... that their are fighting for one thing. be it a task or protecting their interest....
^^
Line 4, column 478, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...heir own, same way that production team cant sell what they produce too. But through...
^^^^
Line 4, column 586, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
... all this group come together and build some thing great for the business. Same is applic...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d allow those not improving to die off. it is a plausible claim, but even when the...
^^
Line 6, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...be able to achieve anything meaningful. which is of no use for what a nation represen...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83262711864 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63386597543 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.310116802 60.3974514979 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.05 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210092255027 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688878479856 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708574045546 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141430877648 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534275798153 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.