In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals nowadays believe that both spouses should labor and provide for their families. It is desirable, for my money, to segregate duties within a family, even if it is not always necessary.
Those who endorse this viewpoint emphasize the morality of empowering women in marriage. Most civilizations have historically denied women the right to work. As women have obtained greater rights as citizens, both officially and implicitly, in recent decades, they have been able to further their professions. This independence is linked to a sense of responsibility. Women today have the chance not just to work and achieve their full ability, but also to take on more responsibilities. As a consequence, they may assist relieve financial constraints at home while also improving their self-esteem.
A clear distribution of tasks in a family, on the other hand, is the finest approach to nurture one's child. If both parents work, as is increasingly frequent in Western countries, the children are likely to be neglected. Though wealthy families might alleviate this disadvantage by hiring a babysitter and a housekeeper, this is a poor substitute for the affection of one's biological parents. Furthermore, most middle-class families must simply work harder at work and at home. This can create severe weariness in the long run, leaving parents feeling helpless and overburdened, and can even lead to worry and melancholy.
Finally, while it is preferable for both parents to work, this does not allow for healthy family balance. This does not suggest that only men should work, as either the husband or wife might become the principal breadwinner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29657794677 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06914537174 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.021524579 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978110779144 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325955870116 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429488962693 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694100302891 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326798693652 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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