Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Writing task 2
Today's world, with the manufacturing sector becoming significantly more difficult than it was just a decade ago, greater credentials and perspective are required to be competent for any position. As a result, nearly everyone avoids acting or shifting their efforts. People who have lots of responsibilities for their families, in particular, should consider this. A whole other option is for them to take full advantage of the chance, and that is what I prefer. The advantages and disadvantages of a regular schedule will be discussed in this article.
For starters, many employees seem to be unable to bear the gamble of switching jobs due to life constraints, anxiety, and responsibilities. Since they are focused about or anticipating their family's. On the other hand, this type of personality has always been on the cautious zone, constantly saying that one bird in my hand is preferable than ten in the tree. For obvious reasons, my dad works as a schoolteacher at a private college and has never changed his career path since this occupation keeps him comfortable.
Furthermore, just several people are willing to adapt to a new environment. To elevate their living class and make their goals a reality. Conversely, if such an opportunities present itself, they will seize it. That type of individual has much more enthusiasm, drive, and objectives for their life. Moreover, they are well aware of their requirements. Most people, I know, are desperate to shift their profession. For example, my closest buddy has the opportunity to change careers as a result of his determination to become the managing director of a multinational firm.
Finally, availing immediate and effective measures to switch your job and career will allow you to gain more experiences in your growth and encounter various individuals with multiple connections. Everything just will also provide you with the opportunity to better oneself and affect your activities instead of being in the identical place your entire life. As a result, concentrating your arrested development in one location will have a monotonous effect on your spirit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24117647059 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12062011405 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6376971156 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7894736842 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171635723622 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488789166127 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232854066066 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973881230339 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115904606303 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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