Task 2: Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to
find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree?
Climate change is currently to be the most pressing problem for not only our mother Earth but
also for human lives. It is controversial whether people should put an end to climate change or
just get along with it. I am of the opinion that preventive measures are still crucial while people
try their best to start a harmonious living.
On the one hand, the destruction of the Earth is irreversible which is sufficient for environmental
recovery. Firstly, despite the hard-working of the scientists, they can not guarantee there will be a
second Earth for the civilization. Prevention should be considered a safe option for the worst
situation. Secondly, the cascading effects that the rapid increase of CO2 emissions has on us are
seeing no sign of alleviation. The government is in the progress of making a concerted effort but
the conditions of the heatwave, ice-melted, polluted air are far from getting better.
On the other hand, it can be argued that the Earth’s temperature can not be cooled down
immediately so people have to adjust their lives around it. I can firstly base my argument on the
relentless population size. More than seven billion people on this planet are still getting older,
getting married, and having kids one day, which will need more energy and this is inevitable.
Secondly, the luxury of human living is actually producing more discharge than they thought
they were. The more the economy grows, the more CO2 gases are released. The developed
countries have no intentions of stopping getting richer either the developing countries want to
stop their developments.
In conclusion, people should take seriously in protecting the environment while they have the
chance as well as come to terms with the notorious environment nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18213058419 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84552268079 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9014690655 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107648306309 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333693043898 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395124940445 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0292153046418 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357665799814 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.