As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems.What are these problems for young people living in cities?What are possible solutions for these problems?
Nowaday, many big cities around the world have become developed. However, this development brings some problems to the young generation living there. In this essay, the issues will be analyzed with relevant solutions.
First of all, developing in big cities has caused pollution and damage to the environment. Those big cities around the world always have a significantly number of people living, therefore people had to cut down tree to build apartment or other facilities. In addition, more wastes from household and traffic are release to the environment; as a result, pollution is one of the major concern in big cities. To help protect the environment in big cities, the government should encouraged citizens to use environment friendly product, including recycled goods and more public transports.
Moreover, as cities are developing more and more people want to live in the cities; as a result, the population in the city also increase while space for housing decreases. Therefore it would increase the price of living costs, including food or housing. the obvious answer to this impact would be the government should moving some companies, factories and universities to suburb area which will help to reduce population in the big cities. Therefore, the high population in different area will be equally and reduce price of living cost.
in conclusion, there are two main reason contributes for young generation living in the big cities including pollution and expensive living costs. the government should encourage people using more recyced products, public transport and relocated some facilities to countryside area would be some feasible solution to combat this issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41287878788 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78579622067 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3451164901 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187744459923 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698303228406 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643169969817 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121423707597 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313297324213 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.