The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart illustrates the then leading nations in terms of the generation and demands of electricity in 2014.
Overall, a majority of countries produced more energy than their consumption, while China and the United States were notable energy consumers.
Looking into the chart, it is noticeable that China and the USA appeared to be topping the chart, with features of both production and consumption being all over 3000 billion kWh. To be more specific, China occupied the first place with nearly 5400 billion kWh generated and used, which is followed by the United States with both numbers fluctuating around 4000 billion kWh. The Republic of Korea was the smallest energy producer among the ten countries, which sent out 481.1 billion kWh of electricity with a simultaneously reasonable consumption of 450.5 billion. Moreover, Germany was the only member to have consumed more energy than its production, making it the most apparent feature. Apart, from the two leaders China and the USA, other countries produced and consumed relatively insignificant capacities, with figures ranging from 450 to 1000 billion kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34831460674 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73062027477 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.062081819 43.030603864 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.4 112.824112599 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157742484745 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800950971776 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776988262921 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118765609137 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730952034934 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.2329268293 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.