In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses, for example, food and drink industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, the use of plastic containers in the food and beverage sections is on the rise in many nations around the world. Along with this matter is the heated debate about its merits and demerits. From my perspective, although there are still exist some noteworthy disadvantages, the drawbacks of using plastics box are much greater than its drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is obvious that plastic bags’ demerits is fully informed over the planet, from the virtual world to the real one. The first disadvantage that should be mentioned is the degradation of our environment when plastic containers are used in the long run. It takes one plastic piece up to 1000 years to be completely broken down. Because its millennial decomposition progress, not only marine creatures but also terrestrial animals are more likely to be in danger since plastic is all over their habitats. It is even more clear when our planet has witnessed the extinction of some kinds of fish because of plastic waste into the ocean. The second point that should be taken into consideration is that plastic can pose a great threat to our health. As a variety of research have been carried on in order to grasp more thorough knowledge about this matter, it is proved that the long-term use of containers made of plastic can make a contribution to cancer and other health hazards.
On the other hand, some advantages do exist but can not be able to surpass the above drawbacks. It is undeniable that the prominence of plastic containers is attributed to its flexibility and versatility, especially in the beverage industry, where take-away food and drinks are in favor of the mass population. Especially, the use of plastic bags is vital when it comes to shipping since hot or cold beverages can be kept for a long time and can be taken through a long distance without losing its initial taste. Not only for that reason but plastic bag is also known to be more cost-effective than others containers, paper bags or bamboo containers for instance.
In conclusion, although plastic containers do bring humans some benefits, I strongly believe that its negative effects outweigh its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92411924119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75280865818 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542005420054 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3544068666 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.133333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213649471379 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731149725945 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478586061973 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128492320595 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231984808987 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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