Some people think that the most important aspect of their job is their sallary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important respect of a job? Include specific details and examples support your chouces.
In recent times, people are becoming more materialistic than past, as a result, the value of money is increasing day by day. It is argued why some individuals that salary is more crucial in their job instead the nature of job. I believe that money is essential to fulfill basic needs and enjoy an honourable life.
To commence with, having some amount of money is important to get necessities of life, food, shelter and cloths. Many people do work in difficult situations in order to survive. For instance, Bihar is a area of the poor state in India where people have to do work in coal mines and have to live in dangerous circumstances. Thus, individuals prefer to salaries in place of nature of occupation.
Furthermore, nowadays, living respectful life has become a trend, it totally changed the attitude of individuals towards their job. People give more value to salary rather than their job because money is not only important to fulfil their desires but also gives them better lifestyle. Individuals can provide good education for their children and enjoy prosperous life. For example, in developed countries, many people enjoy their lives because of good salaries and they do various occupations in order to get huge amount of money. Hence, money plays a vital role in the lives of people than job itself.
To conclude, in modern times, people give more importance to their salaries instead of their professions itself because they are eager to fulfil their basic needs and enjoy prosperous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98418972332 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62323770492 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533596837945 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9323596066 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211037226431 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817457869367 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648633286307 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138382209367 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463387044803 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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