It is thought by some that life is better in a city. Others however prefer life in the countryside.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that whether living in rural areas or metropolitans is better. In my opinion, both options have their merits and drawbacks which will be elaborated below.
Many prefer to urban area to the countryside may claim that city life offers them better standard of living and numerous chances to success. The former may be rooted in the fact that cities are often prioritized by governments funding. Thus, with substantial resources allocation, the urban areas are constructed with more modern infrastructure. Likewise, given the huge investment from the authorities, the public service in cities tend to be superior to the remote regions in terms of quality and convenience for the local. To illustrate, the best hospitals are regularly located in city centre, well-equipped with the most advanced technology and recruit most skilled medical workers.
Despite the benefits of accommodating in lively cities, some advocate to the peaceful lifestyle in the countryside. This way of life has implication of various mental and physical health benefits for it’s inhabitants. There would be less pollution, the main culprits of cancers and other incurable diseases. In addition to the restriction of medical issues, the fresh air and quietness may bring people a sense of tranquillity. It is also important to note that contrary to popular belief, the inhabitants in remote place now can approach to a wide range of services and goods thanks to the development of transportation system and in internet access.
In sum, cities provide their citizens with varieties of merchandise and service with highest redeeming feature, while inhabiting in rural places is suitable for people who favor closeness to nature. It depends on individuals to select their types of accomodation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, may, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37857142857 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99549832316 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639285714286 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.15838969 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14755011493 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432912986882 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528089893627 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743846002173 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377623838521 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.