Some people today believe that it is acceptable to use physical force to discipline children, but others feel it is completely unacceptable
Corporal punishment has currently been being a controversial and much debated issue. While a section of the public holds the opinion that adopting physical forces to monitor children is an apporpriate method, others claim that this is highly unacceptable. From my perspective, I reckon that these ways cannot prove their effectiveness
Firstly, there a numerous justifications which culminate in the fact that physical forces are the worst way to keep their scions discipline. To begin with, parents who support those ways of education tend to physically punish their offsprings for wrongdoings without explaining or guiding them to alternative positive behaviors. As a result, they have to tell lies in order to avoid punishment or they would view punishment as an endorsement of aggression. Moreover, corporal punishment may also provoke feelings of resentment or humiliation, hence, children may develop unfeeling atitudes towards others' pains.
By contrast, many may believe in its mild application. For instance, physical forces are effective in achieving immediate child compliance or in other situations, they can relieve parental frustration. Nevertheless, these are only instant solutions, in the long term, they can result in both mental and physical pains. It is advisable for adults to use verbal explanation to teach ethical issues, as well as allowing children to take responsibility of their negative behaviors.
All things considered, I personally opine that it cannot be a conducive measure to make regulations which are compulsory for offsprings. Others positive ways of unbringing should be take into account instead of physical forces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'justification'?
Suggestion: justification
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
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Message: Did you mean 'taken'?
Suggestion: taken
...s positive ways of unbringing should be take into account instead of physical forces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, i reckon, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60956175299 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1107757494 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661354581673 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4762733251 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167983817238 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573490188663 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453190947634 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970427854467 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309758734519 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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