Nowadays, many private cars can be seen on the road. There are so many people driving around that it is hard to see people on the street. Private cars that are made for the benefit of people are very damaging to the environment. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, private cars pollute the environment. Cars are not conductive to the environment by themselves. First, it causes air pollution. Therefore, the concentration of carbon dioxide in the atomsphere increases and this has a serious impact on people as well as the environment. Also, automoblie waste causes soil pollution. This is doubling and tripling the amount of waste and increasingly dumping into the ocean, causing marine pollution. For example, in the past, the weather was very accurate and proper as the weather forecast, but these days, the weather is very bad and the weather is too hot or too cold.
Next, private cars take away a lot of nature. Of course, air pollution and soil pollution also harm nature, but the most serious thing is road construction. As more and more people use cars, road construction is being carried out more than before. As a result, the soil is changed to asphalt, all innocent trees are pulled out and when it rains, the rain never goes out, so urban flooding also occurs. Moreover, there is also a heat island phenomenon where heat is concentrated in one place because there is too much asphalt. For instance, there was a flood in the past, when all the roads were flooded and the school bus was unable to move.
Lastly, private cars hurt animals. Animals usually live in nature. But as there are more and more cars, they are destroying nature and eventually destroying the habitat of animals. Therefore, many animals have already become extinct. Especially, many cats are being hit by cars on the street.
To sum up, private cars pollute the environment, take away a lot of nature and hurt animals. We should refrain from using private cars and use public transportation or bicycles for the sake of our planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, of course, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58770785169 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.917949701 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2916666667 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187669639912 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546993831129 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613456282583 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107758087598 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461482260452 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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