The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by nguvl on Sun, 08/07/2022 - 16:20

It is believed that the use of electronic media negatively affects personal relationships between people. From my perspective, I advocate this statement but I believe that it also has some positive effects and they will be explained in the paragraphs below.
On the one hand, electronic media are likely to be a factor contributing to worse relationships between people. First and foremost, the use of electronic devices such as smartphones or computers is causing people to heavily rely on messages and phone calls instead of meeting face-to-face. Children who use them too much usually lack the incentive to participate in outdoor activities with their peers, which causes them to lack some l necessary social skills, and physical strength. Moreover, if they play computer games or chat on mobile phones too much, they can get addicted to it in the long run. Therefore, their communication skills get worse and this may reduce their impression on others.
On the other hand, there are a variety of benefits that electronic media brings to people in terms of their relationships with others. One good thing is that they can keep in touch with their friends who live far away from them. Furthermore, electronic media can help everyone widen their relationships and make friends from every corner of the world thanks to social networking. Last but not least, it also makes people feel connected to society even when they are alone as it enables them to know what other people are doing via social networking, chatting, video calls, etc.
In summary, electronic media may cause people to be distant from each other. However, it also helps us get closer when we are far from each other. Obviously, the disadvantages are not significant enough to outweigh the positive sides so i believe that electronic media will thrive even further in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nough to outweigh the positive sides so i believe that electronic media will thri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in summary, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04248366013 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75872938291 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4132353547 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24527278384 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943155551839 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106012009367 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154652810625 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558015976618 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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