Television has the biggest impact on our life because it is the most popular way of getting information. Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely acknowledged that in the modern era, the advancement of technology, such as television, is seen as an enormous change to various aspects of human lives. While people perceive it in a negative light, I strongly believe that it plays a crucial role in daily life in terms of being stay-up-date with news owing to the following reasons.
First and foremost, the programs which are directly aired on-site, virtually record the situation of those events. Consequently, the viewers directly are watched and experienced as if they were on the field. A case in point, in comparison with newspapers which people can likely read and imagine the contexts through the wording and few images, television using electrical signals facilitates them to send the real sound, and images and simultaneously transmit the information.
Furthermore, this electronic device frequently provides more up-to-date information than others. In the light of continuously updating the news, a myriad of knowledge in the spheres of entertainment or education is regularly available on this audio-visual media. As an illustration, during the midst of covid-19 crisis, telediffusion stations arranged several education programs for students to study online in fear of the long-term and adverse impacts of the interruption of the learning process.
To sum up, television has considerable merits in absorbing knowledge since the information on television is directly broadcast on site and also is the latest and various at the moment. As a result, it acutely useful if the inhabitants spend time watching the news through this form of media.
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| 2022-08-14 | JoannaSatharson | 11 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, while, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40551181102 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11991169229 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.685536074 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0653741409079 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216489771245 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289830235479 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377932638 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223496663559 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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