Television has the biggest impact on our life because it is the most popular way of getting information. Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely acknowledged that in the modern era, the advancement of technology, such as television, is seen as an enormous change to various aspects of human lives. Some people perceive it in a negative light. However, I strongly believe that due to its popularity as a source of information, television has a significant influence on how people live owing to the following reasons.
First and foremost, the programs which are directly aired on-site, virtually record the situation of those events. Consequently, the viewers directly are watched and experienced as if they were on the field. Moreover, in comparison with newspapers which people can likely read and imagine the contexts through the wording and few images, television using electrical signals facilitates them to send the real sound, and images and simultaneously transmit the information.
Furthermore, this electronic device frequently provides more up-to-date information than others. In the light of continuously updating the news, a myriad of knowledge in the spheres of entertainment or education is regularly available on this audio-visual media. As an illustration, during the midst of covid-19 crisis, television stations arranged several education programs for students to study online in fear of the long-term and adverse impacts of the interruption of the learning process. Additionally, few animal programs facilitates children to widening their knowledge about the world from the primal era.
To sum up, television has considerable merits in absorbing knowledge since the information on television is directly broadcast on site and also is the latest and various at the moment. As a result, it is acutely useful if the inhabitants spend time watching the news through this form of media.
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| 2022-08-14 | JoannaSatharson | 11 | view |
| 2022-08-14 | JoannaSatharson | 11 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51648351648 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15178849972 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4873352534 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797337733729 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236847204938 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322115288072 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046247251621 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199359381901 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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