Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world , we can not disregarded telling truth in our relationships.Controversy exsits over whether saying the truth is of paramount importance in any relationships.In my vantage point,telling truth is the role of our lives because not only can it build trust in our relationships,but also it is make more love for couples.
First of all, telling truth can build trust for couples.That is to say,when people saying truth in their relationships they can make a confidence between them moreover they make confidence to one another in their mind.they could treat better and they do not aggressive.For example, i know a couple that they do not tell truth to each other and everytime they discuss and they angry about it.Therefore,couples always should telling truth to each other to make confidence for another .
Secondly,the second point which is of paramount importance in relationships is that make more love and concentrate better on their live's.That is to say, when the couples telling truth to each other they make more love for themselves and they do not argue to each other.They can betther concentrate on their work and their live's because they do not have any bad though about their partner so, they could work betther.For example, i know a couple that they always telling trurt to each other so they love more each other and they can concentrate on daily works for example,job,workout,baby,housework,..etc. Therefore,telling truth caused couples can better consentrate on their daily works and their emotional relationships .
All in all, saying truth is of paramount importance in people's relationships and should be the role of our live's since it can make confidence or build trust between partners and their emotional relationships and it is caused more love between couples and they can concentrate on their daily works.Who can ignore the prominent role of telling truth in any relationship?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22402597403 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85283611239 2.67179642975 144% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.38961038961 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.1344086022 303% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.168307631 48.9658058833 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 321.8 100.406767564 320% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.6 20.6045352989 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 5.45110844103 374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139126680733 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987750223003 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397311386923 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111549908937 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350332850695 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 11.7677419355 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.0537634409 263% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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