Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
quality of living.
The first point that should be mentioned here is that moving from one place to another cause provides us opportunities for advances. That is to say, every people migrate to another place to progress their knowledge and have opportunities for advances. For example, every year there are thousands of students go to foreign countries for studying and living there with a lot of nostalgia. In this part of their lives, they learn how could they use their opportunities to progress their abilities and the government of foreign countries provides them a piece of very good equipment to raise the science of their country. Therefore, moving to another place leads to having a better life and provides them opportunities for advancement.
Another point that should be mentioned here is that moving from one place to another lead to a boost in their quality of living. That is to say, migrating from one place to another provides facilities for better living. For instance, students going to another place they have a lot of equipment for their student life like cheap transportation or the government or university giving students funding to live better so they can boost up the quality of living because they do not have any issues to prepare their living expenses so there is no mental pressure on them. Therefore, mental health will lead boost in the quality of living.
All in all, we do not ignore the key of moving from one place to another since it can provide us opportunities for advances and it could boost the quality of living. Who can ignore the prominent role of migrating to another place?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Quality
quality of living. The first point that shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90579710145 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64725924618 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427536231884 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0430104004 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199631707845 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952625055879 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726874398576 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164556336062 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271147767948 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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